Above this is my first draft of My music magazine, My teacher advised me as well as other people who looked at the magazine that i should narrow the white around the text, make the cover lines smaller, and make it look less Messy. I also need to make my main headline to stand out. My tag line is currently under the mast head as you can see from the picture above but i will experiment by moving it above the Mast head as some magazines generally have it above.
After hearing this, I will make these improvements.
